Young generation is the future of a country. A country can be developed if and only if their youth is successful in their long term goals. I believe that youth should be encouraged to concentrate on their long term goals rather then fame and popularity which can be gained immediately because the things which can be gained easily have a scope of losing them in a short span moreover they are not permanent. Goals which are arduous require hard work but once succeed in achieving them boosts a lot of confidence.
Firstly, people should set goals in order to achieve something in their life, parents need to encourage their children to achieve their goals. To illustrate, nowadays Pakistani youth without goals are encouraged to join in terrorism which resulting in burgeon of crimes all over the world. In addition to these, people who failed in achieving their goals are also interested in committing crimes due to the lack of encouragement towards their long term goals.
Another point to consider is youth in global are seeking fame and recognition in their early ages which may affect the world. To give a clear idea, most of the teenagers in India after finishing their graduation moving to films to gain fame. However, all of them cannot sustain in movie field and a lot of them are dropping in early stages by doing so, this will have negative impact on their future. Instead of wasting their time on short term fame if they concentrate on long term goals this might help adolescents achieve goals early. They are experiencing these type of situations due to lack of guidance and encouragement towards their long run goals.
Thirdly, there are many ways to achieve long term goals either by going along with the society or against to the society. For example, if a young age boy dream is to become a rich man, he can become rich either by working hard or by robbing banks. This situation is clearly seen in many foreign countries like America. In America teenagers crime rate is increasing every year because of lack of care and encouragement by their parents towards their goals.
In conclusion, people should achieve their goals by hardworking not by find shortcuts. Things which we get easily without hard work would not be long. Parents and society play an important role in achievement of goals by youth. So, parents and society need to assist and encourage young people achieve realistic goals.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 229, Rule ID: RATHER_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'than'? 'than' is used for comparisons, 'then' is an expression of time.
Suggestion: than
...entrate on their long term goals rather then fame and popularity which can be gained...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, third, thirdly, for example, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 58.6224719101 116% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2008.0 2235.4752809 90% => OK
No of words: 413.0 442.535393258 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86198547215 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50803742585 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52642060931 2.79657885939 90% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 215.323595506 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.489104116223 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 611.1 704.065955056 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.740449438202 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8997601273 60.3974514979 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.4 118.986275619 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.65 23.4991977007 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.21951772744 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217135152528 0.243740707755 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0743385803135 0.0831039109588 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520076566244 0.0758088955206 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140652773856 0.150359130593 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0500631407559 0.0667264976115 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 14.1392134831 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.8420337079 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.1639044944 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 100.480337079 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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