Young people should be encouraged to pursue long-term, realistic goals rather than seek immediate fame and recognition.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
The author of issue highlights that individuals should be galvanized in order to follow long-term plans and real goals instead of being well-known for a short period of time and follow short-term plans and wait until luck shines up. Due to the controversial nature of this question, there is not a general agreement on this issue. I am, however, to a great extent of the conviction that if people look for long-term plans and goals, they will guarantee their lives without serious difficulties. In the following paragraphs, some convincing reasons will be delineated to elaborate my personal stance.
To commence with, it is established beyond doubt that people have always been looking for success and make a progress in their personal life throughout history. Although life difficulties come in different forms and shapes, being encouraged by others could help us face those trials and tribulations successfully. Broadly speaking, vast majorities of people are not mature enough to make a sound decision and anticipate their future life wisely. Indeed, some advice and encouragement by experienced people could provide an opportunity for individuals learn how to recognize their goals and plans. As far as I am concerned, achieve a long lasting success and make a progress day in day out is required a precious long-term plan, which patronizes people to reach the pinnacle of their life. Delve further into the issue, short-term plans and fame or being well-known just for a specific time is like a blank dream that not only can prevent people from being successful but also can prevent individuals from being self-sufficient. As a tangible example, many studies have shown that myriads of people who set long-term plans for their lives indeed, overcome obstacles and make a durable success in their personal life.
Another reason that should not go unnoticed is that immediate fame will definitely diminish self-confidence and self-esteem. Generally phrased, many people who want to reach fame in a blink of an eye will confront many protests by other people due to the fact that they never thought about long lasting goals and plans and what they want from their lives. In fact, this situation will just decrease their confident that in some case, it could be like a disdain. To elucidate more on this issue, set various kinds of rules alongside long term plans not only can rise up confident and self-esteem but also can guarantee people's fame and make them well-known forever. As a matter of fact, this situation could help people being imitated by others.
However, what I alluded to above can't be overgeneralized by all contexts. Alongside with the innumerable benefits, it has, indisputably, whole youth take their age into consideration like to be fame as soon as possible and make long-term goals might not be attractive to them. Indeed, nowadays teenagers are much more intelligent rather than past generation so, if they look for recognition, it enhances the likelihood of being successful in a short time.
In light of reasons elaborated, I reiterate that people especially youth should be encouraged in order to reach their goals whether forever or for a short period. In fact, making long-term plans will provide fertile ground for people to seize success vigorously and guarantee their future life. In addition, this situation will patronize youth to develop their self-confidence and continue their life and career extensively and successfully.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 160, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...instead of being well-known for a short period of time and follow short-term plans and wait un...
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Line 3, column 108, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'progress'.
Suggestion: progress
...lways been looking for success and make a progress in their personal life throughout histo...
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Line 7, column 34, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...rs. However, what I alluded to above cant be overgeneralized by all contexts. Alo...
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Line 9, column 296, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...rously and guarantee their future life. In addition, this situation will patronize...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, well, broadly speaking, in addition, in fact, as a matter of fact, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 12.4196629213 153% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 14.8657303371 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 33.0505617978 142% => OK
Preposition: 73.0 58.6224719101 125% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2916.0 2235.4752809 130% => OK
No of words: 561.0 442.535393258 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19786096257 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.86676880123 4.55969084622 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86399459505 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 273.0 215.323595506 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.486631016043 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 890.1 704.065955056 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.740449438202 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.38483146067 205% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1977771223 60.3974514979 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.545454545 118.986275619 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 23.4991977007 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.36363636364 5.21951772744 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 10.2758426966 195% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216302591312 0.243740707755 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0714844058798 0.0831039109588 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.040510775667 0.0758088955206 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137997723085 0.150359130593 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0164646261915 0.0667264976115 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 14.1392134831 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.1639044944 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 128.0 100.480337079 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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