youths should be encouraged to embrace a life of a long term goal rather than short term fame
There is no doubt the future of a nation rests on the youths. In fact, as it is often said they remain the leaders of tomorrow. A prompt recommends that youths should be encouraged to embrace a life of a long term goal rather than short term fame. In my opinion, I strongly agree with this recommendation since one of the expedient way of living a fruitful life is the longevity of one’s success.
First and foremost, if youths are encouraged to set long term goals, they will be committed to acting morally and working assiduously to gain what they truly deserve. This will go a long way in ensuring development of the society in the long term, however, if youths are to remain attached to short fame, development in such societies will only be seen for a short period of time. For instance, in a community where the youths are committed and having long term goals, development will be seen as a gradual process which continuous over time rather than a swift process characterized by celerity and later regression. In the mentioned community above, future generations will live to see consequences of the actions of their predecessors who were youths that made the society be what it is their time with this they will be inspired to work doggedly and set right goals, following the footpaths of their parents.
Secondly, the goal of every society is to be successful, people who set long term goals working daily enduring tend to be more prepared for challenges while learning along the process. Such experience tends to expose individuals to experience which will later help them overcome future challenges. For example, if an individual set a goal in becoming an academician, it is not a day job, it requires sleepless nights of researching and garnering experience from all possible location. This pragmatic experience tends to prepare the individual for the future more, making them professionals in their professions.
Some would argue however, that youths should be encouraged to embrace a life of short term fame, due to the fact that it tends to enhance richness making youths become affluent within a short time, however, if we are to painstakingly examine their view, that should be another reason we should inspire our youths to chase and pursue long term goals as anything in the short term is not sustainable and thus scathe, and we really need a society replete with hard working citizens who are not sloth but assiduous.
In conclusion, setting goals play a crucial role in ensuring that individuals properly spend their time judiciously helping us attain the society we have all longed for.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, no doubt, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2181.0 2235.4752809 98% => OK
No of words: 443.0 442.535393258 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92325056433 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58776254615 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75631027923 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 215.323595506 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487584650113 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 672.3 704.065955056 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 23.0359550562 135% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 109.359009035 60.3974514979 181% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.785714286 118.986275619 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.6428571429 23.4991977007 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1428571429 5.21951772744 194% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.464544493112 0.243740707755 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.168163461688 0.0831039109588 202% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.237871034667 0.0758088955206 314% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.266590393161 0.150359130593 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.164662120593 0.0667264976115 247% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 14.1392134831 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.85 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 100.480337079 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 11.2143820225 128% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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