All too often, companies hire outside consultants to suggest ways for the company to operate more efficiently. If companies were to spend more time listening to their own employees, such consultants would be unnecessary.
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Productivity and efficiency is unquestionably the goal of any business. In life, many people often share their perception on how sharing one's problem play a role in getting the panacea to such problem. If companies keep hiring their internal agents there is high probability of such firm to be in stagnation. Hence, hiring external consultants will help companies truimph and achieve their goals. This is undisputable because it allows companies to hire those with more experience, Select consultants who are well versed in a particular niche and most importantly, to learn new ideas from other consultants in regards the strengths and weaknesses of the business or a company.
Firstly, there is no doubt that experience is the best teacher, if companies hire the right people who are well acquainted with the market and demand of a community, then such company will undoubtedly become efficient. This is of importance, if th consultants or customer care executive in the Firm are only versed about their products and not market. For success, students are always encouraged to meet their seniors who performed excellently in their various endeavors so as to be able to mentor them and follow their footsteps. If business owners hire successful consultants, then the company is on the way to its Dreamland.
Additionally, another important reason why a company will perform efficiently hiring external consultants is the fact that their employees may be specialist in another niche and not adequately knowledgeable about the value addition which many customers easily consider before patronizing a product. Therefore, hiring external consultants will help in filling the gap.
More so, hiring external consultants will allow employees of a company to focus on other important aspect of production instead of reducing staff strength on researching on improvement because if they had wanted to improve the company, they ought to have started since their visit to work.
Finally, considering all these important factors, it is glaring that if companies continue to hire their workers in improving their efficiency, then it is indubitably, a form of wasting the firm's resources. Some may argue that spending on external consultants may increase the production cost, however, they fail to reminisce the fact that productivity and efficiency is the goal which bring about profitability -The ultimate goal of every business/merchandize or company.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, so, then, therefore, well, as to, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2081.0 2235.4752809 93% => OK
No of words: 382.0 442.535393258 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44764397906 5.05705443957 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08505826461 2.79657885939 110% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 215.323595506 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544502617801 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 640.8 704.065955056 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 82.1884655992 60.3974514979 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.642857143 118.986275619 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2857142857 23.4991977007 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 5.21951772744 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304216852007 0.243740707755 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11268423489 0.0831039109588 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543723492555 0.0758088955206 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176624241789 0.150359130593 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0499888477467 0.0667264976115 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 14.1392134831 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 48.8420337079 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 12.1743820225 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 12.1639044944 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 100.480337079 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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