The table below shows the average annual percentages of water pollution I four large cities in 2003. Summarize the following information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
A glance at provided table reveals four principal contributors which cause water pollution in four distinctive cities namely, New York, Tai Pei, Sao Polo and Tokyo. Data is concerning annual statistics in 2003 and domestic sewage, erosion, phosphates in detergents and pesticides were taken as contributors.
It is apparent from the information supplied that domestic sewage resulted in the highest rates of water pollution in Sao Polo where 65% of pollution caused by this factor. Remaining cities Tai Pei, Tokyo and New York suffered from this factor by 50%, 23% and 41 % respectively.
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Sentence: While Tokyo 23 was going through higher water pollution problems owing to erosion than other cities, it was phosphates in detergents for New York accounting for 34 of total pollution.
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Suggestion: Refer to was and phosphates
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