4. The bar chart below shows the average monthly maximum temperatures for three Australian cities in the year 2016.
The chart demonstrates the average maximum temperature for every month in Melbourne, Darwin and Perth in 2016.
Overall, it is obvious that similar patterns about the temperature change can be noticed in Melbourne and Perth in 2016, with the lowest temperature in July and the highest one in Jan. However, there were two temperature peaks in this year in Darwin.
As we can see, the mean temperature in Darwin remained relatively stable in 2016, with an average of over 30 Celsius degrees, even in June (30.6 Celsius degrees) and July (30.5 Celsius degrees), which are winter in Australis. In this year, the hottest month was November, with an average maximum temperature of 33.3 Celsius degrees.
On the other hand, Melbourne and Perth witnessed a similar trend in weathers, with an average monthly maximum temperature below 30 Celsius degrees. Although the average temperature in Perth was slightly higher than that in Melbourne, there were always the same changes in the whole year. In the two places, the lowest temperatures were in July, respectively with 13.4 Celsius degrees and 18.8 Celsius degrees, while the highest ones in January (25.8 and 28.1 each).
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 132, Rule ID: IN_JANUARY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'on June'? This seems to be a day date.
Suggestion: on June
...verage of over 30 Celsius degrees, even in June 30.6 Celsius degrees and July 30.5 Cels...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 434, Rule ID: IN_JANUARY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'on January'? This seems to be a day date.
Suggestion: on January
...Celsius degrees, while the highest ones in January 25.8 and 28.1 each.
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 979.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 190.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15263157895 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61756796471 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531578947368 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 297.9 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5857743845 43.030603864 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.375 112.824112599 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.75 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.125 5.23603664747 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26087686608 0.215688989381 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149459410027 0.103423049105 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102395513359 0.0843802449381 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205170238459 0.15604864568 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0978169000813 0.0819641961636 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.2329268293 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 61.2550243902 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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