4. The bar chart below shows the average monthly maximum temperatures for three Australian cities in the year 2016.
The chart demonstrates the average maximum temperature for every month in Melbourne, Darwin and Perth in 2016.
Overall, it is obvious that similar patterns about the temperature can be noticed in Melbourne and Perth in 2016, with the lowest temperature in July and the highest one in Jan. However, there were two temperature peaks in this year in Darwin.
As we can see, the mean temperature in Darwin remained relatively stable in 2016. The average monthly maximum temperature was over 30 Celsius degrees, even in the winter in Australis, which are June (30.6 Celsius degrees) and July (30.5 Celsius degrees). In this year, the hottest month was November, with the mean maximum temperature of 33.3 Celsius degrees.
On the other hand, Melbourne and Perth witnessed a similar trend in weathers. Although the average temperature in Perth was higher than that in Melbourne for the twelve months, the average monthly maximum temperature for the two cities was below 30 Celsius degrees. There were always the same changes in the two places. In Melbourne and Perth, the lowest temperatures were in July, respectively with 13.4 Celsius degrees and 18.8 Celsius degrees, while the highest ones in January (25.8 in Melbourne and 28.1 in Perth).
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 471, Rule ID: IN_JANUARY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'on January'? This seems to be a day date.
Suggestion: on January
...Celsius degrees, while the highest ones in January 25.8 in Melbourne and 28.1 in Perth. ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 519, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ry 25.8 in Melbourne and 28.1 in Perth.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1041.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 202.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15346534653 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62090728276 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.49504950495 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 315.0 283.868780488 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1295501611 43.030603864 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.1 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.3 5.23603664747 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286733757331 0.215688989381 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129878950328 0.103423049105 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12142047591 0.0843802449381 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215876476275 0.15604864568 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0924499117502 0.0819641961636 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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