6 Average weekly household expenditure by region 2007 09

Essay topics:

6. Average weekly household expenditure by region, 2007-09

The bar chart gives information about the average weekly household expenditure in the country and in different regions in England from 2007 to 2009.

As we can see, between 2007 and 2009, the average expenditure clustered between 400 to 500 Euros per week, except those of North East (with 390 Euros as the lowest expenditure region), South East (520 Euros) and London (550 Euros). The mean living costs in London and South East ranked as top and the second during the period of time. There was a huge difference of about 130 Euros per week between the lowest (in North East) and the highest living costs (in London).

In the two-year period, it is interesting to note that the mean weekly costs for England were approximate 470 Euros, which was higher than those of half of the regions, excluding the expenses in the top four areas: London, South East, East (490 Euros) and South West (480 Euros), preceding average weekly expenditure in other five regions.

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Average: 4.7 (2 votes)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 314, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...ranked as top and the second during the period of time. There was a huge difference of about 1...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, so, as to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 788.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 165.0 196.424390244 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77575757576 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28779650665 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569696969697 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 226.8 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 22.4926829268 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.3483254131 43.030603864 196% => OK
Chars per sentence: 157.6 112.824112599 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.0 22.9334400587 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 5.23603664747 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26987808895 0.215688989381 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.163278961467 0.103423049105 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.148461852002 0.0843802449381 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.233926563298 0.15604864568 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.131612320992 0.0819641961636 161% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.2329268293 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.9 61.2550243902 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.04 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.9970731707 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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