In many countries, people have children later in life than in the past. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages? What is the cause of this?
Globally, the issue of whether it is an advantageous trend to have babies later in life has been a topic of discussion for many years. Some people believe that it is beneficial to give birth when young people are older enough to take responsibility, while others argue that it may be risky to have a baby when the mothers are older. This essay will compare the benefits and drawbacks and discuss the main reason for the phenomenon.
There are various advantages of having children later in life when people are mentally and financially ready. Without sufficient money and a sense of responsibility, young people cannot raise and educate children properly. In countries like India, for example, it is not uncommon to find indigent underages pregnant while they are not able to live a decent life, let alone support the family with education and food. In this case, having children when people are mature with enough savings would be a better way.
Conversely, when it comes to the disadvantages, the higher risks of delivering babies and the lower possibility of pregnancy when parents are older cannot be ignored. To be more specific, it is significantly difficult for women over 35 to have babies and give birth safely based on medical evidence. For instance, couples in China tend to have babies before 30 because it is easier and safer for the mothers considering their health condition. Thus, people need to take those things into consideration when they make decisions about having children later.
This essay has discussed whether it is rewarding to have children later in life because people can get ready for parents’ role, or it is harmful due to the risks pregnant women will undergo. On balance, this essay believes that advantages are stronger since irresponsible parents will pose a detrimental impact on their children. The primary reason for this later pregnant phenomenon is the increasing financial burden on parents. All over the world, parents and children will be much happier and healthier if governments can more family supports.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, if, may, so, thus, while, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1724.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08554572271 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70591370978 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536873156342 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 551.7 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.4760142063 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.933333333 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27214917168 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104279811539 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0744101122815 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181118750014 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.064981462171 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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