Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The rules that the whole societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict.
Every person is a social being and cannot live without the whole society. In order to be isolated from others or the world, people have to follow lots of rules whether written in the paper or existing in citizens’ minds. Some people think that the rules our society putting on the Young's shoulder is too strict and they should be freer and happier without these rules and expectations. According to my perspective, however, young people should definitely obey these rules because they are suitable.
First of all, it is way necessary for young people to obey some certain rules establishing in the society. Rules become rules because ancient people can avoid mistakes or failures by following them. One type of rules--laws, for instance, can never be broken. People who do not follow the laws will be punished because they do something harmful to others or the whole society. A person will have no bright future if he ignores what the modern laws said. In that case, the young ought to study rules in the society deeply or they will hurt others and then eat the bad fruits in the end.
In the second place, the young can actually gain a huge amount of benefits from following the rules. The majority of the rules in the society is about behaviours and manners. The people can be polite and gentle when they obey the social regulations. They will know not only how to start a conversation properly and end a topic politely but also how to cooperate with others. By conducting the appropriate social manners, the young will make more friends and keep good relationships with their boss, coworkers and costumes, which is indispensable for personal promotions and improvements. Thus, some social rules can truly benefit the young in the future.
At last, rules surviving in today’s society is far less strict than those in the past. The government and the elderly do not push younger people to do without their willingness. In the past, every young people had to serve army for two years in China, while girls and boys still can enrol army only if they want to. Also, those who had ambitions in politics had to work in poor villages three decades ago. The young can work everywhere they like nowadays. Gradually more parents do not have a very high expectation for their children and be satisfactory if the young can lead a happy life. So the rules are not that strict anymore.
In conclusion, the young actually have few rules to obey form the society, the government and parents. Our society can tolerate all kinds of living styles with latest rules to follow. So please do not break them at will.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 156, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the latest'.
Suggestion: with the latest
...can tolerate all kinds of living styles with latest rules to follow. So please do not break...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, however, if, second, so, still, then, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, first of all, in the second place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 9.8082437276 194% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2167.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 453.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78366445916 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61343653406 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49250346491 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509933774834 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 672.3 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 10.0 3.08781362007 324% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.3024985279 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.3461538462 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4230769231 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42307692308 5.45110844103 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.343773974887 0.236089414692 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0973802745429 0.076458572812 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0585030192004 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209191498559 0.150856017488 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0357129045731 0.0645574589148 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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