Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The rules that the whole societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict.
Family, college, company and society consists of rules and everyone living in this environment are supposed to obey them. Rules are changing from past to nowadays and many people consider too strict for the younger. Although I always think that life is full of rules and hardships, I still do not agree with it.
First of all, rules have changed increasing flexible today with the highly developed technology. Thanks to the Internet and electronic products, young people are able to take online courses or work at home, which means they can manage the time freely under more fewer rules. For example, when I get the chance to finish job at home, there is no need to get up early in the morning as before. The best approach to complete tasks is improving efficiency instead of following the regular working schedule, in other words, working rules. If you obtain the ability about getting through work perfectly in time, no one will enforce you to obey the rules. Therefore, today's young people are not be restricted by the regulation.
Moreover, it is hard for people, especially the young generation, to better themselves and achieve final success without rules. People should regard the general rules as motivation rather than a prison. If you realize it, no matter how strict they are, you can accept them positively and even utilize the rules to develop your skills and handle with the difficult situations greatly. When college requires you to take more than one language classes, do not complain it and attempt to meet the challenge, then you will acquire language speaking skills; when company asks you to fix up the problems you are not specialized in, catch this chance to learn about varieties of knowledge; when there is a requirement for sports scores in school, it offers the time to exercise and take relax in spare time. Bothering the problems will never be a relatively good choice. There is nothing wrong with the rules, it is just the time to adjust your way to think.
Furthermoreļ¼it is necessary to treat young people with strict rules and required them to obey them. Numerous competitions are in surrounding environment and young people need to raise awareness of older regulation as quickly as possible so that they can compete with someone outgoing. It is impossible to do whatever you want and things never happen as you wish. Thus, compared with refusing the rules, following them could be a better choice for young people to adapt the social word.
To put it in a nut shell, the rules that the whole societies today expect young people to follow and obey are not too strict.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 258, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'fewer' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: fewer
...s they can manage the time freely under more fewer rules. For example, when I get the chan...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, still, then, therefore, thus, for example, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2171.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 445.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87865168539 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59293186426 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49149139119 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543820224719 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 676.8 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.1848367256 48.9658058833 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.55 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.45 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.39651721022 0.236089414692 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117659543035 0.076458572812 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118266135543 0.0737576698707 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.277852958859 0.150856017488 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.156773424699 0.0645574589148 243% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 86.8835125448 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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