The bar chart below gives information about global population percentages and distribution of wealth by region
TThe chart compares population shares in various regions of the world with the distribution of wealth in these same regions. it can be seen that population shares in almost all cases do not relate to the distribution of wealth.
Even though north america has only approximately 6% of the world’s population, it boasts nearly 34% of global wealth. A similar situation can be seen in europe, which has 15% of the global population but 30% of global wealth, and the rich (high income) Asia-Pacific countries with 5% of the world’s population but 24% of its wealth.
On the other hand, the total wealth of people in china, india, africa, latin america and caribbean, and the other poor (lower income) countries in Asia-Pacific is far less than their shares of the world population. this is most striking in india, where 16% of the world’s population own only 1% of the world’s wealth and in china, which has the highest percentage of global population (24%) but only 3% of the world’s wealth.he chart compares population shares in various regions of the world with the distribution of wealth in these same regions. it can be seen that population shares in almost all cases do not relate to the distribution of wealth.
Even though north america has only approximately 6% of the world’s population, it boasts nearly 34% of global wealth. A similar situation can be seen in europe, which has 15% of the global population but 30% of global wealth, and the rich (high income) Asia-Pacific countries with 5% of the world’s population but 24% of its wealth.
On the other hand, the total wealth of people in china, india, africa, latin america and caribbean, and the other poor (lower income) countries in Asia-Pacific is far less than their shares of the world population. this is most striking in india, where 16% of the world’s population own only 1% of the world’s wealth and in china, which has the highest percentage of global population (24%) but only 3% of the world’s wealth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 15.0 5.60731707317 268% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 33.7804878049 160% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 3.97073170732 554% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1686.0 965.302439024 175% => OK
No of words: 339.0 196.424390244 173% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97345132743 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 3.73543355544 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91530208728 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.268436578171 0.547539520022 49% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 493.2 283.868780488 174% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 1.53170731707 457% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.2629863473 43.030603864 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.272727273 112.824112599 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.8181818182 22.9334400587 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.36363636364 5.23603664747 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 3.70975609756 297% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247753104687 0.215688989381 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138949288443 0.103423049105 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0719530127408 0.0843802449381 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19524904936 0.15604864568 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0436191729691 0.0819641961636 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.2329268293 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 61.2550243902 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.14 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.57 8.06136585366 81% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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