The bar chart below gives information about the number of students studying Computer Science at a UK university between 2010 and 2012.
The bar chart provides information on how many students chose to enroll in Computer Science of a UK university in terms of gender and nationality ( Britain or others country ) in 3 years starting from 2010
From an overall perspective, international students were dominated by male throughout the span. Another noticeable point is that British students appears to take the course more than foreign students from both gender
Regarding male students, the figure of both British and International students followed an upward trend over 3 years; the pattern, however, was little different. In the initial year, the former’s figure was roughly 40 percent, twice as common as the latter. However, in 2011, while the latter moderately grew, the number of home registrants witnessed a significant decline, both reaching an identical figure, approximately 24 million male students. Following that, at the end of the span, the number of men studying Computer Science in the surveyed institution was developed in both home and foreign students, with nearly 42 and 40 million, respectively.
Turning to females, the number of local students was practically identical compared to male students; whereas, the figure for overseas students was much lower in all 3 years. Standing at about 30 and 15 at first, correspondingly, while the number of originated students dramatically climbed up by slightly over 10 million in 2011, followed by a stable remainder, the overbroad students population gradually rose to 20 million in the last timeline.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, regarding, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1300.0 965.302439024 135% => OK
No of words: 240.0 196.424390244 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41666666667 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00457983751 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 106.607317073 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604166666667 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 387.9 283.868780488 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 22.4926829268 151% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.6026807825 43.030603864 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 185.714285714 112.824112599 165% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.2857142857 22.9334400587 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 5.23603664747 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23852435183 0.215688989381 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0997007854531 0.103423049105 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0790585352391 0.0843802449381 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152134193326 0.15604864568 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0897053587719 0.0819641961636 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.2 13.2329268293 160% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.97 61.2550243902 60% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 10.3012195122 161% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.75 11.4140731707 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.13 8.06136585366 126% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 40.7170731707 179% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.9970731707 142% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.0658536585 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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