The bar chart below gives information about the preferred leisure activities of Canadian children.
The bar chart provides information about five different leisure activities chosen by boys and girls aged from five to fourteen in Canada percentagewise. Overall, it is clear that children favored watching TV or videos the most, while the percentage of children that chose skateboarding or rollerblading was the lowest.
The share of boys that liked to watch TV or videos was the highest and accounted for 100%, followed by the figure for electronic or computer games with was just above 80%. The proportion of male kids that liked to ride the bike consisted of well above 60% in comparison with remaining categories such as skateboarding or rollerblading and art and craft which both comprised the tiny minorities.
With regards to Canadian girls, the figure for the percentage of participators had the identical pattern to boys' with two major differences in both categories skateboarding or rollerblading and art and craft. It is noticeable that if in the category of art and craft Canadian girls significantly outperformed boys by approximately 20% than in skateboarding or rollerblading the percentage of female participators was considerably less then male's.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 273, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to skateboard'.
Suggestion: to skateboard
...e the percentage of children that chose skateboarding or rollerblading was the lowest. Th...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rding or rollerblading was the lowest. The share of boys that liked to watch TV...
^^^
Line 5, column 436, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[2]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...ale participators was considerably less then males.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, well, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 985.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 184.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35326086957 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.32099905681 2.65546596893 125% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554347826087 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 306.0 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 31.4894162114 43.030603864 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 164.166666667 112.824112599 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.6666666667 22.9334400587 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 5.23603664747 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124884165855 0.215688989381 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0672484014306 0.103423049105 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0899089032391 0.0843802449381 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0987017440735 0.15604864568 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112708736465 0.0819641961636 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.1 13.2329268293 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.57 61.2550243902 53% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.51609756098 224% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 10.3012195122 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 11.4140731707 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.