The graph shows information about the percentage of people in full-time employment in Germany, Italy, Spain and the G7 average.

Essay topics:

The graph shows information about the percentage of people in full-time employment in Germany, Italy, Spain and the G7 average.

The bar chart illustrates the percentage of people worked on a full-time basis in Germany, Italy, Spain and the Average of the G7 countries, with dividing workers by three different age groups. Overall, the largest share of people who worked full-time belongs to workers in the 25-54 age bracket, while the percentage of people were in full-time employment of the youngest group is the smallest.

In regard to the 18-24 age group, the percentage of Italian workers did full-time is slight above 20%, following by just under 20% of workers from Spain. Even though the vast majority of people employed full-time is from Germany (just above 30%), it is still significant less than the share of workers contributed by the Average of the G7.

In terms of the 25-54 age bracket, the most considerable part of workers in full-time employment is contributed by Germany (just above 80%), following by Italy (under 70%) and Spain (just above 60%). In this age group Germany outraces the G7 Average (well above 70%), while the contribution of the remaining countries is still under.

According to the oldest group, Germany accounts for approximately 60% of people (fairly equal contribution of the Average of the G7 countries), while the percentage of workers from both Italy and Spain constitutes around 50%.

Votes
Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, still, well, while, in regard to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 33.7804878049 133% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1082.0 965.302439024 112% => OK
No of words: 214.0 196.424390244 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05607476636 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70858793435 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.46261682243 0.547539520022 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 324.9 283.868780488 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 28.5999857286 43.030603864 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.571428571 112.824112599 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.5714285714 22.9334400587 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 5.23603664747 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284148468475 0.215688989381 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15832585351 0.103423049105 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0832115854438 0.0843802449381 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191647215229 0.15604864568 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100509396974 0.0819641961636 123% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.2329268293 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 61.2550243902 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.66 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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