The bar chart below show the number of tourists visiting two different cities by season
The given bar chart illustrated information about how many of people spend their time in Dover city and the Troy city at various times in the year.
In overall, the rate of tourists, visitors in Dover city grow considerably over the year from spring to winter, while Troy visitors vary considerably by season.
Both cite had the lowest rate of tourists, visitors. in spring with 5000 for Dover city and around 4900 in the Troy city. The number of tourists, visitors of the Troy city significantly rose to 22000 visitors in the summer. while only 10000 of people visited Dover in the summer. In the fall at Dover city the rate of tourists, visitors rises moderately to 10000.whereas, the number of people who visited Troy city in the autumn dropped modestly to 15000. The number of tourists, visitors in Dover city increased substantially by 25000 in winter. However, Troy city experienced a dramatic decrease in 5000. when the weather gets cold.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 196, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...ourists visitors over the year in Troy. However the number of people who visited Dover ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 731.0 965.302439024 76% => OK
No of words: 151.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84105960265 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50485253369 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 80.0 106.607317073 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529801324503 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 212.4 283.868780488 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.5868200222 43.030603864 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.2 112.824112599 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.2 22.9334400587 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 5.23603664747 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135560566849 0.215688989381 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0785136027062 0.103423049105 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0386072943986 0.0843802449381 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0981678537769 0.15604864568 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0323556432216 0.0819641961636 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.2329268293 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.95 61.2550243902 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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