The bar chart below show the number of tourists visiting two different cities by season
The given bar chart illustrated information about how many of people spend their time in Dover city and the Troy city at various times in the year.
In overall, the rate of tourists, visitors in Dover city grow considerably over the year from spring to winter, while Troy visitors vary considerably by season.
Both cites had the lowest rate of tourists, visitors. in spring with 5000 for Dover city and around 4900 in the Troy city. The number of tourists, visitors of the Troy city significant rse to 22000 visitors in the summer. while only 10000 of people visited Dover in the summer. In the fall at Dover city the rate of tourists, visitors rises moderately to 10000.whereas, the number of people who visited Troy city in the autumn dropped modestly to 15000. The number of tourists, visitors in Dover city increased substantially by 25000 in winter. However, Troy city experienced a dramatic decrease in 5000. when the weather gets cold
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... considerably by season. Both cites had the lowest rate of tourists, visitor...
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...nt rse to 22000 visitors in the summer. while only 10000 of people visited Dover in t...
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...xperienced a dramatic decrease in 5000. when the weather gets cold
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...xperienced a dramatic decrease in 5000. when the weather gets cold
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 7.0 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 795.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 161.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93788819876 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60329224482 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 81.0 106.607317073 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503105590062 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 238.5 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.3710657315 43.030603864 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.5 112.824112599 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1 22.9334400587 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.1 5.23603664747 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178843586348 0.215688989381 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0740504067866 0.103423049105 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489209060967 0.0843802449381 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120088459667 0.15604864568 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0367688505358 0.0819641961636 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.2329268293 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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