Medical procedures for cosmeti purpose should not be allowed.Do you agree or disagree?
It is true that some individual want to undergo surgery for improve their look. While some people tend to viewpoint that disagree with topic .I would have to support idea that agree with subject.
On the one hand, there are clear argument that cosmetic surgery has enormous disadvantage. One of the main reasons can be addiction, some individual get addicted to cosmetic surgery for changing their look, Psychologist s argue that beauty surgery has significant effect on patients state of mind, as they may increase the severity of or develop bodies, therefore there are grave consequences for those person, some common danger include that fact can be permanently damage to their muscles and skin.
On the other hand I agree with viewpoint that cosmetic surgery for changing the appearance, first and main benefit of such procedure is Psychologist benefit, If someone want to undergo surgery for change how they look, it is reasonable to assume that they are unhappy with their look. Richard.C.Atkinson. in book of “Atkinson and Hilgard introduction to Psychology and mind behavior “said: some people who are unsatisfied with some aspect of their appearance and desperately want to change it frequently struggle with anxiety and depressions which is mental health, therefore changing their look will help them to more incline to social and will improve their confident.
Secondly cosmetic surgery in some cases can make better your physical health. For example a liposuction allowing patients who undergo this surgery to be more physical active, after completion this. The results of the study in Nanjia Medical University shows obesity has positive and significant effect on health, therefore those people could reduce the chance of developing issue like heart disease, diabetes and increase blood pressure.
In conclusion it seems to me that cosmetic surgery has clear benefit to be agree with.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, in some cases, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1625.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38079470199 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78690140438 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549668874172 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 122.406740011 49.4020404114 248% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 162.5 106.682146367 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.2 20.7667163134 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.4 7.06120827912 190% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110700396564 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0504678663596 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0383917651343 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0753041151007 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0178364470842 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.0 13.0946893788 145% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.57 50.2224549098 65% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.52 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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