The bar chart below shows percentage of adults of different age groups inthe UK who used the Internet every day from 2003-2006

Essay topics:

The bar chart below shows percentage of adults of different age groups in
the UK who used the Internet every day from 2003-2006

The bar chart compares the usage of Internet in percentage for 4 different age groups in UK on their daily basis over the period from 2003 to 2006.
Overall, Internet becomes less popular as age increase however, in each group there was a growth in the percentage of Internet users over the period described. Additionally, Internet is accessed most by people aged 16 to 24.
In 2003, 80% of 16-to24-year-olds was recorded to use Internet. This number is much lower for groups aged 25-44 and 45-54 which are nearly 50% and 45% respectively while users aged 55-64 was just one-third compared to those in the original year while there was no statistics of usage for the oldest group.
During the remainder of the 3-year period, the slightly increase was seen in the youngest group which reached peak of 90% in 2005. The second youngest and the 55-64 group shared the same pattern over the period with 10% and 5% increased each year respectively. With middle-aged people, the proportion of them using the Internet climbed to 60% before falling to 55% in 2006, followed by senior citizens whose Internet usage was always under 15%.

Votes
Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, second, third, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 939.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 193.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86528497409 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59733857677 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611398963731 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.2086949674 43.030603864 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.375 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.125 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.125 5.23603664747 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262680784236 0.215688989381 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129588890924 0.103423049105 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114018360964 0.0843802449381 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198976846231 0.15604864568 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.124296303906 0.0819641961636 152% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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