The bar chart illustrates that the proportion male and female in Australian who did daily physical exercise in 2010,Category was divided into six different's age group.
Overall,It is shown that male who are younger then 25 years they did more regular exercise rather than other men whereas Teenage teenage women was second lowest figure of women age group here 45 to 50 ages group was highest proportion of this chart.
Looking into more details, boys into 15 to 24 age group more involved in daily physical exercise attending 52.8 percent and thereafter the proportion kept on downward tendency till 35 to 44 age groups acquiring 39.5 percent.It was a increasing tendency Rest of age groups in 65 overs it reached 46.7 percent.
Women attending in physical exercise after reaching mature age in teenage ages 15 to 24 only 47.7 percent women attend in physical exercise compared to women age groups it was 2nd lowest participation ratio .However after 25 to 54 this three age groups was a increasing tendency for participation of women and reached at 53.3 percent it was highest attending ratio entire chart .Rest of chart was a downward tendency a acquire 47.1 percent it was lowest participation rate whiten women age groups.
- The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010. 67
- Government should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 67
- Government should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 61
- Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages? 56
- The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone call in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002.Summarise the information by selecting a reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, second, then, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1028.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 205.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01463414634 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65667869743 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526829268293 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 315.9 283.868780488 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 51.0 22.4926829268 227% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 120.702112658 43.030603864 281% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 257.0 112.824112599 228% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 51.25 22.9334400587 223% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 10.0 5.23603664747 191% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 28.0 1.69756097561 1649% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310379789246 0.215688989381 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.226682036736 0.103423049105 219% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0903432124098 0.0843802449381 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226682036736 0.15604864568 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0903432124098 0.0819641961636 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.8 13.2329268293 210% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 28.17 61.2550243902 46% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.0 10.3012195122 214% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.67 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.06136585366 117% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 22.4 10.9970731707 204% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 22.0 11.0658536585 199% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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