Modern world transportation railways and road both play a big role in our daily life and Government invest for both but when
it comes to priority for budget ,people express different voices .Some say road should be firse priority some say railways and some say both deserve equal attention ,
while i personally prefer railways as a first priority of government investment.
Railways is much more environmentally friendly. Unlike cars, people could not find a exhaust system built in any recent train. This is a concrete
indication that implies less emission, since almost all nowadays railway solutions are powered by electricity. In addition, railways occupy less
ground and can be expanded in a three dimension manner which is believed a very good approach to limit the environment impact
From consumers perspective,railways offering better user exprience .Punctuation and save and comfortable journey most significient for them.Many modern city
suffer from traffic jam due to large amount of personal car and it is increasing day by day,while in the other hand railways give a traffic jam less journey for example in Tokyo
Japan biggest city in the world they solve their traffic jam by railways everyday millions of people in this city using train for reached their workplace,However
in transport system accident is a vital part in road every year thousands of people die because of road accident as an example in Bangladesh last few years thousands of people gives
their life on road due to road accident but opposit scenerio for railways .
In conclusion ,Save and comfortable journey and economic both side train is much butter then roads vehicle and it also save government
economy .
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ut when it comes to priority for budget ,people express different voices .Some sa...
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... budget ,people express different voices .Some say road should be firse priority s...
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...udget ,people express different voices .Some say road should be firse priority some ...
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...nd some say both deserve equal attention , while i personally prefer railways as ...
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...t priority of government investment. Railways is much more environmentally fr...
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...dly. Unlike cars, people could not find a exhaust system built in any recent trai...
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... in any recent train. This is a concrete indication that implies less emission, s...
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...icity. In addition, railways occupy less ground and can be expanded in a three di...
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...oach to limit the environment impact From consumers perspective,railways offe...
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...pact From consumers perspective,railways offering better user exprience .Punctu...
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...railways offering better user exprience .Punctuation and save and comfortable jou...
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...ilways offering better user exprience .Punctuation and save and comfortable journey most s...
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...able journey most significient for them.Many modern city suffer from traffic jam d...
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...t significient for them.Many modern city suffer from traffic jam due to large amo...
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...onal car and it is increasing day by day,while in the other hand railways give a traff...
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... using train for reached their workplace,However in transport system accident is a vit...
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...rain for reached their workplace,However in transport system accident is a vital ...
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...cident but opposit scenerio for railways . In conclusion ,Save and comfort...
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...rio for railways . In conclusion ,Save and comfortable journey and economi...
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...mic both side train is much butter then roads vehicle and it also save government e...
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...h butter then roads vehicle and it also save government economy .
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...oads vehicle and it also save government economy .
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...le and it also save government economy .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, then, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1446.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2967032967 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92032581702 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619047619048 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 45.0 20.2975951904 222% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 308.316621169 49.4020404114 624% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 241.0 106.682146367 226% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 45.5 20.7667163134 219% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 14.5 7.06120827912 205% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 12.0 4.38176352705 274% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 26.0 5.01903807615 518% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.097144375527 0.244688304435 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0497413638266 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0283515966732 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0404842219315 0.151304729494 27% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0260057100323 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.3 13.0946893788 201% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 25.8 50.2224549098 51% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.8 11.3001002004 184% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.35 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.09 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 20.0 10.1190380762 198% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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