Government should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
modern world transportation play a big role in our daily life where railways and the roads take most vital
Position in busy life. Maximum people use railways and roads rather then water way both are important but some
authority believe that for investing money for transport system railways will be the first priority then roads.
I agree with this statement because present traffic jam world railways only solution and it is more saver and
comfortable then roads vehicles it also better for economic prespective.
railway is a save and comfortable area for passengers . In todays world road accident is a common phenomenon everyday
thousands of people die because of road accident whereas train accident nowadays a common phenomenan train makes our modern life faster,
traffic jam less and also punctual. In Tokyo Japan world biggest city where train is main transport everyday millions of people
use it that’s makes their life faster smother and punctual because train come to station due time if any passenger come on late he
or she missed 10 to 20 munities in city area for long journey he missed total travel, Another example from Bangladesh here every year
thousands of people give their life on roads for road accident but train accident is a rare case there.
After buying every things service or product consumers think two think money and choose or satisfaction in this criteria
train take advantage role because of money and also good service .In a train can accommodate average 90 passengers per vehicle
if it will be a 15 vehicles train then it can take 900 passengers per transit whereas a public bus can take 40 to 60 passengers ,a
car can take 1-7 passengers where rent is higher than train.
In conclusion ,save and comfortable journey and economic both side train is much butter then roads vehicle and it also save government
economy .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, then, whereas, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1572.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02236421725 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50910159797 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555910543131 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 20.2975951904 192% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 138.865436214 49.4020404114 281% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 196.5 106.682146367 184% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.125 20.7667163134 188% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 16.0 4.38176352705 365% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 28.0 5.01903807615 558% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0941441263432 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0530600763761 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501232445523 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0370562145899 0.151304729494 24% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0501439976338 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.8 13.0946893788 166% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.89 50.2224549098 63% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 11.3001002004 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.43 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.1190380762 174% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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