Modern world transportation play a big role in our daily life where Railways and the roads take most vital
Position in busy life. Maximum people use railways and roads rather then water way both are important but some
authority believe that for investing money for transport system railways will be the first priority then roads.
I agree with this statement because present traffic jam world railways only solution and it is more saver and
comfortable then roads vehicles it also better for economic perspective.
Railway is a save and comfortable area for passengers .Firstly road accident is a common phenomenon everyday thousands of people die because of road accident whereas opposite scenario for train,Secondly tone is punctuation ,in present world traffic jam is a big problem for many big city but only train can removes this problem as an example In Tokyo the capital city of Japan it is also world biggest city where traffic jam make their live slower train overcome this problem everyday millions of people use train for their move. Finally a comfortableness it is a combination of road safety
saving time both train can give a passenger.
Railways is much more environmentally friendly. Unlike cars, people could not find a exhaust system built in any recent train. This is a concrete indication that implies less emission, since almost all nowadays railway solutions are powered by electricity. In addition, railways occupy less ground and can be expanded in a three dimension manner which is believed a very good approach to limit the environment impact.
With all above opinions considered, I would agree that government should increase the fund towards the railways than roads in general, but still, they should have a case-by-case analysis to put the money in the most efficient and effective use.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, then, whereas, in addition, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1533.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16161616162 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73459548155 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599326599327 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 129.254206895 49.4020404114 262% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 153.3 106.682146367 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.7 20.7667163134 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.38176352705 205% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173109370662 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0694319030948 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648111794804 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0782300591713 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.072650898463 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.24 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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