The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010
The pie charts illustrate the comparison of working hours for two categories of people, which are doing their job from home, self-employed and employees. They depicts the compare of the people in the united kingdom in the year 2014.
Overall, while employees are operating the average amounts of hours, self-employed are have to do their jobs much less hours. The total amount of people engaged in diverse segments is very different.
Whilst the most of the employees home workers have to do 30-45 hrs, which is almost a half, 42,1%, over a third of self-employment , are tend to do a job these hours. The minority of those, who are operating for employers, about 26,4%, should not to do a lot of work, 30 hrs and less. In contrast, a greater proportion of (40,2%) self-employed doing the same hours.
The percentage of those, who are doing operation for themselves and for employers at home in the united kingdom in the year 2014 are working more than 45 hrs per week was not absolutely the same, about 25,3% and 31,4%, respectively. Though, for the first group of people this made up the smallest part of the chart.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 160, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'They' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'depict'
Suggestion: depict
...home, self-employed and employees. They depicts the compare of the people in the united...
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Line 1, column 234, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...in the united kingdom in the year 2014. Overall, while employees are operating t...
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Line 23, column 88, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
...age amounts of hours, self-employed are have to do their jobs much less hours. The t...
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Line 23, column 115, Rule ID: LESS_DOLLARSMINUTESHOURS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer hours'?
Suggestion: fewer hours
...employed are have to do their jobs much less hours. The total amount of people engaged in ...
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Line 23, column 115, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun hours is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...employed are have to do their jobs much less hours. The total amount of people engag...
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Line 45, column 131, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
..., 42,1%, over a third of self-employment , are tend to do a job these hours. The m...
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Line 45, column 138, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'tended'.
Suggestion: tended
..., over a third of self-employment , are tend to do a job these hours. The minority o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, third, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1016.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 195.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21025641026 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69044985238 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579487179487 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.4424865014 43.030603864 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.888888889 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.44444444444 5.23603664747 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0445739485746 0.215688989381 21% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0208700032248 0.103423049105 20% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0269083356427 0.0843802449381 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0294978561743 0.15604864568 19% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0297110539267 0.0819641961636 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.2329268293 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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