The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.
The chart illustrates the proportions of male and female who do routine exercise among six different age categories in Australia in the year 2010.
Overall, it can be seen that in all age groups over 25-year-old, females did more regular activity than males, whereas the only age category that the higher percentage of men did active sport than girls was the youngest one. Moreover, the difference in the proportions of active men and women was the least in the oldest age range.
Regarding to the bar chart, the boys aged 15 to 24 exercise regularly more than the girls, with the percentage of %52.8 and %47.7 respectively. However, there was a reverse situation in the next age category (25 to 34), where %48.9 of females were more physical active on regular basis, compared to %42.2 of males.
In the three age groups in a range of between 35 and 64, the figures for males and females who did kind of routine physical activity were between 39.5 and 45.1 for men and between %52.5 and %53.3 for women. Of the six age categories shown on the chart, only the eldest ones were close each other in terms of proportions of men and women doing regular exercise at %46.7 and %47.1 respectively.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, regarding, whereas, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 967.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 208.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64903846154 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49217989196 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533653846154 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 301.5 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 36.527317147 43.030603864 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.142857143 112.824112599 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.7142857143 22.9334400587 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.14285714286 5.23603664747 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.397186004121 0.215688989381 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.182223373438 0.103423049105 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0379892148921 0.0843802449381 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.263713300847 0.15604864568 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0632719868526 0.0819641961636 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 10.3012195122 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.