The diagram below shows the life cycle of a salmon from egg to adult fish

Essay topics:

The diagram below shows the life cycle of a salmon, from egg to adult fish.

The diagram illustrates the time period of salmon’s life in river, estuary and ocean.

Overall, it can be seen that salmon are done their lifetime in eight different steps and also travel through three different places during the cycle, beginning from river to estuary to ocean and ending with going back.

Firstly, salmon start their life cycle by adult salmon spawning and then eggs are incubated for a while. After incubation, from these eggs, baby salmon emerge, and this step is followed by freshwater rearing where salmon get bigger. The next one, estuary, is a transition part between river and ocean, and salmon continue their growing here as well.

The third place, ocean, hosts the next stages except the last one, starting with immigration of salmon to rearing areas. This is continued by the growth and the becoming mature period, and then salmon finish their time in ocean by going back to spawning areas, where all these stages are taken place first, to lay down their eggs. Thus, the life cycle of the next generation starts over.

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, so, then, third, thus, well, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 882.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 177.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98305084746 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.14366394148 2.65546596893 81% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621468926554 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.7847930279 43.030603864 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.25 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.125 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 5.23603664747 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23092532024 0.215688989381 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118967477964 0.103423049105 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0919042660971 0.0843802449381 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151157211016 0.15604864568 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0807441944853 0.0819641961636 99% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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