The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did a regular physical activity in 2010

Essay topics:

The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did a regular physical activity in 2010.

The graph compares the percentage of males and females in Australia from the various age bracket who performed daily physical exercises, in 2010.
Overall, what stands out from the data is that the figures for men are higher than women only for the 15 to 24-year-olds, whereas the opposite trend is observed for other age groups. However, there is a marginal difference in the number of the eldest group.

Looking at the details, for men, the percentage reports the highest at 52.8% for the 15 to 24 year age group, while the least is recorded by those belonging to the middle age between 35 to 44, which is 39.5 percent. Moreover, figures for the age bracket 45 to 54 and 54 to 64 were quite similar with 43.1 and 45.1 percent respectively.

On the other hand, with regards to the female population, the data for the age groups 45 to 54 and 54 to 64, constitute the highest percentage with a negligible difference at 53.3 and 53 percent. This is followed by the 35 to 44-year-olds at 52.5 percent. In addition, one significant factor is the data registered for the elderly of 65 and above accounts the least at 47.1 percent, which is nearly identical to that of men.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, moreover, whereas, while, in addition, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 966.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 209.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62200956938 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63496954257 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555023923445 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 283.5 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.9266886835 43.030603864 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.75 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.125 22.9334400587 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.375 5.23603664747 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16695020837 0.215688989381 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0793435426183 0.103423049105 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0555848955769 0.0843802449381 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117880859824 0.15604864568 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0380672023255 0.0819641961636 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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