The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.
The bar chart illustrates the gender distribution of individuals' participation in routine exercise in Australia in 2010.
Overall, the chart indicates that in Australia, participation in regular exercise In four of six age brackets are women-dominated; however, men have a significant presence in taking an everyday exercise in the youngest group age.
In four of six age brackets, females outnumbered males, with a slight proportion of doing regular exercise. In three age brackets including 35 to 44, 45to 54, and 55to 64, the percentage of women participation in regular physical activity was modestly higher than men accounting for 52.5,53.3 and 53 respectively by 27, 10.2 and 7.9 percent lower accounted for men in the same age order( 39.5,43.1and 45.1).
In the group of elderly people (65 and over), the men and women rates were almost similar (46.7 and47.1 for men and women, respectively). The only age group in which men outnumbered women was the youngest, 15 to 24, with 52.8 percent for men (47.7precent for women).
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 860.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 166.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18072289157 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11533743492 2.65546596893 117% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602409638554 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 22.4926829268 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 123.232463255 43.030603864 286% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 172.0 112.824112599 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.2 22.9334400587 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.2 5.23603664747 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31687398159 0.215688989381 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.158413194974 0.103423049105 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054967225256 0.0843802449381 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178369512197 0.15604864568 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0310745075404 0.0819641961636 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.6 13.2329268293 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.98 61.2550243902 62% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 10.3012195122 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.36 11.4140731707 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.06136585366 117% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 11.4329268293 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.9970731707 138% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.0658536585 145% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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