The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.
The given graph shows figures from 10 countries which were ranked from 1 to 10 in electricity consumption and production reporting in 2014. Overall, China and the US held their top spots on the chart, in which figures practically quadrupled numbers from the other 8 nations.
As can be seen from the graph, Chineses’ expenditure and manufacture in electric power were fairly equal to each other, accounted for 5.398 and 5.322 billion kWh. These numbers merely doubled figures of 4.099 and 3.866, recording in the US.
On the other hand, numbers witnessed a gradual decline of approximately 100 billion per order from the top to the bottom of the chart. In detail, the uses of electricity were highly recommended in Russia where figures of 1.057 and 1.038 were reported, these were followed by Japan and India. Furthermore, Canada, France, Brazil, Germany, and Korea did not conduct many investments in electricity, so as to use it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 398, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...onduct many investments in electricity, so as to use it.
^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 415, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tments in electricity, so as to use it.
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, so, as to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 795.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 155.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12903225806 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81566895699 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.658064516129 0.547539520022 120% => OK
syllable_count: 234.0 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6229770947 43.030603864 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.5 112.824112599 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8333333333 22.9334400587 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 5.23603664747 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174777178788 0.215688989381 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0807714064168 0.103423049105 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0756603136194 0.0843802449381 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114164281559 0.15604864568 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.076885431651 0.0819641961636 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.2329268293 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.06136585366 115% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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