The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.
The bar graph illustrates the ranking of the ten countries in terms of producing and consuming electricity in year 2014.
All in all, China and United States consume the most electricity for they produce the most as well comparing to the rest of the countries that are included in the ranking wherein their figures have a huge gap with the top two countries mainly because they produce less electricity thus consuming less as well.
To begin with, China ops the ranking producing 5,398 billion kWh of electricity and consuming 5,322 billion kWh. Followed by United States where they produce 4,099 billion kWh and consume 3,866 billion kWh.
Comparing with the top two countries, a significant gap can be noticed from the seven countries in producing and consuming electricity wherein they produce and consume less than 1,100 billion kWh. Ranking third is Russia who is producing and consuming 1,057 and 1,038 billion kWh respectively. This is succeeded by Japan that produces 936.2 and consumes 856.7 billion kWh. Brazil, Germany and Korea Republic are at the bottom f the list. Brazil producing 530.7 and consuming 455.8 billion kWh of electricity, then Germany with the production of 526.6 and consumption of 582.5 of energy. Lastly, the Korea Republic who produces 485.1and consumes 449.5 billion kWh.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 302, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, lastly, then, third, thus, well, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1102.0 965.302439024 114% => OK
No of words: 212.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19811320755 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59694551801 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 305.1 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 22.4926829268 156% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 147.074527593 43.030603864 342% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 183.666666667 112.824112599 163% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.3333333333 22.9334400587 154% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 5.23603664747 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127727836971 0.215688989381 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0877887990311 0.103423049105 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0920425599688 0.0843802449381 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119937486762 0.15604864568 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0935224797337 0.0819641961636 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.7 13.2329268293 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.87 61.2550243902 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.3012195122 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.4329268293 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.9970731707 145% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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