The table below shows the mothly expenditure of an average Australian family in 1991 and 2001.

Essay topics:

The table below shows the mothly expenditure of an average Australian family in 1991 and 2001.

The table provides information about the monthly expenses of an average Australian family and its distribution in 1991 and 2001.

In general, the expenditure that relates to the expenses in accommodation is prioritized as well as with food and other unimportant goods and services. Whereas the money spent in transportation and clothing was given impotance the least.

To start with, in 1991, an average family spends AUD 675. They mainly allocate their money in paying for foo, followed by other goods and services and housing (paying 155, 250 and 95 AUD respectively). At this time, a family uses money less on paying for electricity and water (AUD 75), transportation (AUD 70) and lastly, clothing (AUD 30).

Turning to the spending in 2001, the expenses rose to AUD 715 in one month. Similar to the data 10 years ago, a family put their money more in buying food which accounts for AUD 160. Next to that are for the unnecessary goods and services at AUD 270. Just like before, they also spend the least on transport at AUD 45 and clothing at AUD 20. The only difference at this time is that more money was spent at paying electricity and water bills at AUD 120 and housing comes next at AUD 100.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, lastly, so, well, whereas, in general, as well as, to start with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 990.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 211.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69194312796 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62768749714 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545023696682 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 289.8 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.4049787012 43.030603864 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1818181818 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.18181818182 5.23603664747 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13411789216 0.215688989381 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0744314112629 0.103423049105 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12390343217 0.0843802449381 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138059874814 0.15604864568 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.152209723452 0.0819641961636 186% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.2329268293 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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