The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2012.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2012.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Submitted by Elmi on Mon, 09/03/2018 - 14:11

The given bar chart compares the production and consumption of electricity in ten countries during the year 2014.

It is seen that China, United States and Russia had the most production and consumption of electricity in 2014. China is leading with the production of electricity as well the the consumption of it, with 5,398 billion kWh and 5,322 billion kWh respectively. It is followed by the United States which produced 4,099 billion kWh and consumed 3,866 billion kWh in the year of 2014. Russia came third with almost the same ratio of production and consumption, that is, 1,057 billion kWh produced and 1,038 billion kWh used electricity.

At the bottom of the ranking were Brazil, Germany and Korea, Rep. All of them had nearly same amount of produce and usage of electricity of about 500 billion kWh production and 400 billion kWh consumption.

Overall we can tell that, if we compare the production and consumption of electricity, it is clear that in all of the countries, production of electricity is always higher than the usage of the electricity. China having the most because of it's large population and Korea, Rep. with the lowest due to it's decreased number of population.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 173, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
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Line 3, column 173, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
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Line 7, column 108, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, third, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 3.97073170732 378% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 999.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 200.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.995 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83562603317 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.485 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 288.0 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4627426654 43.030603864 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.9 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.5 5.23603664747 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12684497054 0.215688989381 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0628559759409 0.103423049105 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0828062186122 0.0843802449381 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114634865577 0.15604864568 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0969975128329 0.0819641961636 118% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.08 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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