The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.

This figure shows the most prominent countries which produces and consumes electricity in 2014.
As it can be seen, the Chinese are the leader in both term of production and consumption and in the next step United state occupied the second place by something about 1300 (production) and 1500(consumption) billion KWH difference with china.
The other country significantly dropped down and the third country (Russia) has the amount of 1.057 billion KWH for production and 1.038 (b.KWH) for consumption. There is steady decrease after that and the lowest number of electricity usage and production go for Korean republic with 485.1 and 449.1 for production and consumption orderly.
The projected content for this bar chart is, that the amount of usage and manufacturing for two first countries is not comparable with the number of both term for other 8 countries. Moreover, the statistics which was dedicated to china is approximately equal with the other countries except United States.

Votes
Average: 8.9 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 216, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...oduction and 1500consumption billion KWH difference with china. The other countr...
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Line 4, column 307, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e other countries except United States.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, second, so, third

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 828.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 157.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27388535032 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86111360021 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605095541401 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 236.7 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7347424467 43.030603864 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.0 112.824112599 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1666666667 22.9334400587 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 5.23603664747 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338326405252 0.215688989381 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.158411044863 0.103423049105 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0687993325519 0.0843802449381 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188002045352 0.15604864568 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0660830791877 0.0819641961636 81% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.2329268293 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 11.4140731707 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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