The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The bar chart illustrates the top ten countries productivity and usage of electricity in 2014. The units are measured in billion kWh.
Overall, it is clearly seen that China has generated more electricity and as well as consumed it. While Korea is at the bottom of the chart.
In 2014, China produced around 5398 billion kWh and utilized about 99% of its production (5322 billion KWh). The second highest, the USA, generated, 4099 KWT and consumed 3866 kWh. It is followed by Russia, Japan, India (1057, 9362, 871 of productivity, and 1038, 936, 871 KWh used).
Surprisingly, Germany consumed more electricity, 582 KWh, when compared with its production rate (i.e) 526 KWh. Finally, Korea Republic is at the least production of electricity (485.1 KWh), and as well as in usages of current (449.5 KWh).
To Sum up, China and USA are the leading countries in the production of current, and in consumption as well. While the Korea Republic is the lowest in generating the electricity and as well as in utilization.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...electricity and as well as consumed it. While Korea is at the bottom of the chart. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, second, well, while, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 845.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 171.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94152046784 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8008094117 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567251461988 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 240.3 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 108.423167881 43.030603864 252% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 140.833333333 112.824112599 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5 22.9334400587 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 5.23603664747 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150951392743 0.215688989381 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107425449326 0.103423049105 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110737540278 0.0843802449381 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110239162338 0.15604864568 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0813028123546 0.0819641961636 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.2329268293 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 61.2550243902 98% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.3012195122 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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