Some people think that environmental problems should be solved on a global scale while others believe it is better to deal with them nationally.

Essay topics:

Some people think that environmental problems should be solved on a global scale while others believe it is better to deal with them nationally.

Environmental problems has been a raising issue for human race since beginning of 20th century. Some people believe that all countries in the world should solve environmental issues together while others think the better way is solving these problems locally. This essay agrees that environmental problems should be solved globally. This essay will discuss both points of view.

To resolve environmental problems, countries in the world should corporate with each other. Because environmental problems such as pollution, global warming and climate changes caused by human mainly and have effects on all countries in the world, all countries have responsibility to solve the consequences. For example, global warming is the consequence of heavy industries in developed countries in 19 th century. However, it affects globally, especially countries which have coastal line will suffer worse damages than others. All countries are trying so hard together to solve global warming problems by establishing many global agreements for reducing CO2 and other emissions.

Other opinions agree that each nation should solve their own environmental problems without any help from other countries. Although each country has their own environmental situation, some countries, particularlly developing countries and poor countries, do not have enough financial sources and modern technology methods to resolve these issues. These countries need a lot of support from developer countries.

In conclusion, while some people agree that environmental problems should be solve globally, other thinks each countries should solve their issues by themselves. However, all countries should help and support each others in these problems.

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 409, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'century' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'centuries'.
Suggestion: centuries
...ustries in developed countries in 19 th century. However, it affects globally, especial...
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Line 7, column 78, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'solved'?
Suggestion: solved
...e that environmental problems should be solve globally, other thinks each countries s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so, while, for example, in conclusion, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1476.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.85714285714 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88212184931 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547619047619 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8872501128 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.428571429 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.92857142857 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34266479462 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14104846365 0.084324248473 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.139880618774 0.0667982634062 209% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.249644756513 0.151304729494 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111789793017 0.056905535591 196% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.41 12.4159519038 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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