The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.

Essay topics:

The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.

The presented chart compares proportion of the production and consumption of electricity for ten developed countries in 2014.

As can be seen from the chart, the huge amount of production and consumption of electricity was account for China and USA, because they produced 5398 kWh and 4099 kWh meanwhile consumption rate stood at 5322 kWh and 3866 kWh for them.

In seven countries (Russia, Japan, India, Canada, Brazil, France and Korea Republic), there was a little difference between production and consumption. Production and consumption rate of electricity was 1057 kWh and 1038 kWh in Russia, 936.2 kWh and 856.7 kWh in Japan, 871 kWh and 698.8 in India, 618.9 kWh and 499.9 kWh in Canada respectively. As well as, France produced 561.2 kWh electricity and used 462.9 kWh electricity, those figures were 530.7 kWh and 455.8 kWh in Brazil, 485.1 kWh and 449.5 kWh in Korea Republic.Contrastly, the amount of electricity which was produced in Germany was less than consumption of it. It stood at 526.6 kWh and 582.5 kWh respectively.

In conclusion, most of the countries produced more electricity than consumption of it. As well as, there was a country which production rate less than consumption rate.

Votes
Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, well, while, in conclusion, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 6.8 235% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 3.97073170732 378% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1021.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 199.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13065326633 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91202453141 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.472361809045 0.547539520022 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 265.5 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.9634927491 43.030603864 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.444444444 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1111111111 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 5.23603664747 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206419112839 0.215688989381 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13634916408 0.103423049105 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.141948497495 0.0843802449381 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200768197791 0.15604864568 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.161119725654 0.0819641961636 197% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 61.2550243902 122% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.95 8.06136585366 86% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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