The charts below show the results of a survey about what men and women say makes them most happy.

Essay topics:

The charts below show the results of a survey about what men and women say makes them most happy.

The given pie charts indicate the percentage of reasons which make genders most happy.
Looking at the data on the women’s factors, majority of female gave an interview about they are most enjoyed being with family showing 37% .The next popular factor among women is achievement at work with 25% . Financial security and good appearance follow them being almost the same with 12 % and 11% respectively.
Turning to the data on men’s report, achievement at work brings them most happiness, which is the largest percentage of all factors with 25%. Supporting a successful sports team come to the second place representing 18 % in this group.17% men feel most happy by doing their hobbies. Meanwhile, slightly lower percentage of male found their happiness in financial security.
In general, there are some similarities between what men and women say makes them most happy. There also several striking differences in the percentage of other factors.

Votes
Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

Comments

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, second, so, while, in general

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 806.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 152.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30263157895 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76261650396 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.710526315789 0.547539520022 130% => OK
syllable_count: 241.2 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.6033255612 43.030603864 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.75 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.625 5.23603664747 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291732025065 0.215688989381 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122290112191 0.103423049105 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.138373962221 0.0843802449381 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186356891737 0.15604864568 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0897768152732 0.0819641961636 110% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.2329268293 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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