The bar chart gives information about the number of car journeys into the city centre made by residents and non residents Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

Essay topics:

The bar chart gives information about the number of car journeys into the city centre made by residents and non-residents.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The given graph illustrates how many locals and foreigners entered the city centre by car between 1996 and 2005. It also highlights two events that might have influenced the situation.

Overall, there were more residents rather than non-residents before parking became paid in 2000 and led to the opposite situation, when more non-residents were in the city centre on average. However, after Westgate Street and Park Lane were closed for vehicles in 2003, the number of car journeys decreased considerably.

In 1996 there were just under 10000 car trips of local citizens, followed by fluctuation of the number of them until 1999. At the same time the number of non-resident car rides stood at 50000 and rose steeply to the level of about 8100 in 1999. After introduction of parking meters, the quantity of residents in presented figures halved when it leveled off until 2003. Meanwhile, the number of foreigners in given figures remained the same for three more years.

After traffic became prohibited on Westgate street and Park lane, the number of rides by locals experienced a slight drop to about 3500 rides in 2004, followed by a notable recovery to 4000 at the last observed year. The quantity of non-residents entering the center on private transport, decreased at approximately 60 per cent in 2004. However, at the rest of the period a moderate rise is observed.

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 33.7804878049 145% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1153.0 965.302439024 119% => OK
No of words: 228.0 196.424390244 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05701754386 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72496226759 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 106.607317073 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565789473684 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 350.1 283.868780488 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.252669148 43.030603864 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.818181818 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7272727273 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.18181818182 5.23603664747 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190862914612 0.215688989381 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0678442334629 0.103423049105 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551998208575 0.0843802449381 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114054945651 0.15604864568 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0525382063319 0.0819641961636 64% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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