The bar chart shows the percentage of small medium and large companies which used social media for business purposes between 2012 and 2016

Essay topics:

The bar chart shows the percentage of small, medium and large companies which used social media for business purposes between 2012 and 2016.

The bar chart gives information about the proportion of enterprises with three different sort of sizes employing a wide range of social media for their own operating purposes from 2012 t0 2016.
Overall, apart from figures for big businesses, others showed upward trend in the amount of companies using social networks over the given period. furthermore, the percentage of large companies employing social media presence outnumbered comparing to other ones.
It can be noticeable from the graph, in 2012, only nearly 27% of small companies used social networking sites serving for their own operation. The figure experienced steadily an increase reaching approximately 35% in 2014. Although there was a relative decline in the usage of social media in modest enterprises in 2015 by 5%, the figure could climb incredible up to 50% the percentage those using social networks. With respect to medium business, also in 2012, there was just a little over 30%, however, it was witnessed a significant growth up to 52% in the utilizing of social media presence in 2016, in spite of a slight drop in 2015.
With regard to large enterprises, at the beginning, the amount of those in employing sorts of social media dominated in all over aforementioned ones with nearly 80%. There was relatively stable in the proportion of usage in large businesses around in the given spans. Like other enterprises, also large ones showed a similar decline trend in 2015 with a little over 50%.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, so, apart from, sort of, in spite of, with regard to, with respect to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 6.8 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 33.7804878049 154% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1233.0 965.302439024 128% => OK
No of words: 242.0 196.424390244 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09504132231 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77091613571 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 106.607317073 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 380.7 283.868780488 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6655348115 43.030603864 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.3 112.824112599 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1 5.23603664747 193% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.357101542503 0.215688989381 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128343857264 0.103423049105 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0680208920938 0.0843802449381 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20795480883 0.15604864568 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0513707357607 0.0819641961636 63% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.2329268293 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 61.2550243902 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 40.7170731707 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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