The bar chart shows the types of media that people of different age group used to get daily news in one country in 2011
The bar chart compares the amount of citizens in diverse age groups in terms of the utilizing of different sorts of news media to gain information every single day in an unnamed nation in the years of 2011.
Overall, social network is valued above other things as primary source of getting news every day by adolescents whereas elder age group tend to use radio to obtain news. Whist, micro blogging was deemed to be least popular means of gaining updated news for residents in all age group.
In term of social networks, there was the incredible same in the usage rate of the means to collect news in both adolescents (10-17) and young adults (18-20), by 80% of citizens. In the former bracket, social networks were dominated source, with remarkable figure in comparison with radio and micro blogging by two and three times in orderly. In later bracket, social networks find it hard to top since the utilizing of radio was up to over 90%. Especially, as for these age groups, micro blogging received least choices only a quarter compared to other means.
With regard to elder groups, it can be noticeable that radio still remained its impressive prevalence at around 90% populace. The usage of other sources was lower than one as the number of the year got higher. In oldest group, social networks only accounted for 10% citizens. Meanwhile, the amount of populace chosen micro bogging as primary means of gaining news which constitute in the minority.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 206, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'be the least'.
Suggestion: be the least
...ws. Whist, micro blogging was deemed to be least popular means of gaining updated news f...
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Line 3, column 339, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ging by two and three times in orderly. In later bracket, social networks find it ...
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Line 3, column 494, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'received the least'.
Suggestion: received the least
...as for these age groups, micro blogging received least choices only a quarter compared to othe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, still, whereas, while, as for, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 33.7804878049 148% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1206.0 965.302439024 125% => OK
No of words: 249.0 196.424390244 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84337349398 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41159224681 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 106.607317073 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586345381526 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 374.4 283.868780488 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.625481561 43.030603864 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.636363636 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6363636364 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.81818181818 5.23603664747 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184852282769 0.215688989381 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0658137329656 0.103423049105 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0795757027303 0.0843802449381 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134993957213 0.15604864568 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.095936948307 0.0819641961636 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.2329268293 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 40.7170731707 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.