The map below shows the changes in the art gallery ground floor in 2015 and present day.
The diagram depicts modifications to the layout of ground floor of an unspecified art gallery in the year of 2015 and in the present. Overall, the ground floor underwent extensive transformation with diverse amenities being converted, relocated and added.
In 2015, the reception desk was adjacent to the gallery office, but the present day it was relocated to a new position where it is closer to the entrance. particularly, the hall of gallery office was demolished to further expand space to the right-hand side. Incredibly, there was a lift next to the former stairs, and the café in the top-left corner of the ground floor was replaced by a gallery shop with the vending machine located just outside.
In addition, another major change to the site was the rearrangement of the exhibition rooms. The exhibition room 4 on the left-hand side of the room was divide into a tempolary exhibition and an area for children. By contrast, other exhibition rooms on opposite side remain unchanged.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 156, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Particularly
...ion where it is closer to the entrance. particularly, the hall of gallery office was demolis...
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Line 3, column 286, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ooms on opposite side remain unchanged.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 832.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 165.0 196.424390244 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04242424242 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90557868788 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587878787879 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.8799279672 43.030603864 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.0 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.625 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 5.23603664747 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235282361839 0.215688989381 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100275759621 0.103423049105 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10400958795 0.0843802449381 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161454040027 0.15604864568 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110388023351 0.0819641961636 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.2329268293 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.