The bar chart shows the number odd people who visited different museums in London. Summary the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart gives information about the amount of tourists of four different museums in the capital of British, London around five months from June to October in an unspecified year.
Overall, with the exception of Science Museum, the number odd visitors to other show an upward trend during first half of the period, and then decreased in the second half span. It is noticeable that British Museum was regularly visited in most of months, while national museum was consistently in the last place.
In June, the history museum, British museum and even the science Museum each had over 400,000 visitors, apart from the national museum, a narrow lead with around 200.000 people. In the next month, while the figures for both the history museum and British museum remained relatively stable, the science museum and national one experienced mild drops of around 400,000 and below 200.000 tourists respectively.
Incredibly, however, in august, the history museum and British one witnessed an upward trend in the figures of people visiting these places, with over 700,000 for the former and 600,000 for the later. In September, the history museum’s figure felt into third rank as it dropped out relatively by nearly 200,000 visitors. All three aforementioned museums experienced a downward trend in October at around 450,000 for British museum, 300,000 tourists for Science museum and over 200,000 people for other one. With regard to national museum, in spite of increasing to over 300,000 people in August, generally all over give span, its figures a range from 180,000 to over 210,000 visitors.
The bar chart gives information about the amount of tourists of four different museums in the capital of British, London around five months from June to October in an unspecified year.
Overall, with the exception of Science Museum, the number odd visitors to other show an upward trend during first half of the period, and then decreased in the second half span. It is noticeable that British Museum was regularly visited in most of months, while national museum was consistently in the last place.
In June, the history museum, British museum and even the science Museum each had over 400,000 visitors, apart from the national museum, a narrow lead with around 200.000 people. In the next month, while the figures for both the history museum and British museum remained relatively stable, the science museum and national one experienced mild drops of around 400,000 and below 200.000 tourists respectively.
Incredibly, however, in august, the history museum and British one witnessed an upward trend in the figures of people visiting these places, with over 700,000 for the former and 600,000 for the later. In September, the history museum’s figure felt into third rank as it dropped out relatively by nearly 200,000 visitors. All three aforementioned museums experienced a downward trend in October at around 450,000 for British museum, 300,000 tourists for Science museum and over 200,000 people for other one. With regard to national museum, in spite of increasing to over 300,000 people in August, generally all over give span, its figures a range from 180,000 to over 210,000 visitors.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 10, Rule ID: WITH_THE_EXCEPTION_OF[1]
Message: Use simply 'except' or 'except for'
Suggestion: except; except for
...ober in an unspecified year. Overall, with the exception of Science Museum, the number odd visitors...
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Line 2, column 241, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the months') or simply say ''most months''.
Suggestion: most of the months; most months
...British Museum was regularly visited in most of months, while national museum was consistently...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... from 180,000 to over 210,000 visitors. The bar chart gives information about th...
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Line 6, column 10, Rule ID: WITH_THE_EXCEPTION_OF[1]
Message: Use simply 'except' or 'except for'
Suggestion: except; except for
...ober in an unspecified year. Overall, with the exception of Science Museum, the number odd visitors...
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Line 6, column 241, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the months') or simply say ''most months''.
Suggestion: most of the months; most months
...British Museum was regularly visited in most of months, while national museum was consistently...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... from 180,000 to over 210,000 visitors.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, then, third, while, apart from, in spite of, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 6.8 235% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 100.0 33.7804878049 296% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 12.0 3.97073170732 302% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2688.0 965.302439024 278% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 516.0 196.424390244 263% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20930232558 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.76609204519 3.73543355544 128% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48701936232 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 106.607317073 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.261627906977 0.547539520022 48% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 779.4 283.868780488 275% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 14.0 4.33902439024 323% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 18.0 3.36585365854 535% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 8.94146341463 201% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 30.2561084538 43.030603864 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.333333333 112.824112599 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.6666666667 22.9334400587 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 5.23603664747 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 3.83414634146 209% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.09268292683 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142077787247 0.215688989381 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0764211318819 0.103423049105 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0371746352125 0.0843802449381 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11142259075 0.15604864568 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0372969055754 0.0819641961636 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.2329268293 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.53 11.4140731707 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.49 8.06136585366 81% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.