The bar chart shows the sales figures and profits of ABC Electronics in millions of US dollars over the period 1991 to 2000.

Essay topics:

The bar chart shows the sales figures and profits of ABC Electronics in millions of US dollars over the period 1991 to 2000.

The chart gives information regarding changes in the sales figures and profits of ABC Electronics between 1991 and 2000 and is measured in millions of US dollars.

Overall, it is obvious that the levels of annual sales were far much higher than those of profits over the ten years, and increased slow but sure.

While there was a gradual growth in the numbers of sales from the year 1991 to 1994, standing at 99 million dollars and reaching112, these figures for profits fluctuated slightly, reaching 9 million dollars compared to its starting point at 8.

Profits then increased significantly for the following three years, peaking at 16 million dollars in the year 1997 before declining to 12 at the end. However, after rising to 135, the sales levels leveled off at almost the same rate for two years (1995 and 1996). They increased considerably over the following three years, reaching a peak of 158 million dollars in 1999 before falling to 154 in 2000.

Votes
Average: 8.9 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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...s measured in millions of US dollars. Overall, it is obvious that the levels o...
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... in 1999 before falling to 154 in 2000.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, regarding, then, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 811.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 164.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94512195122 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.514000062 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615853658537 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 219.6 283.868780488 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.0609303353 43.030603864 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.166666667 112.824112599 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3333333333 22.9334400587 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 5.23603664747 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.347147657935 0.215688989381 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.173471122935 0.103423049105 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.139313883808 0.0843802449381 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226955431547 0.15604864568 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.140228875125 0.0819641961636 171% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.2329268293 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.45 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.0658536585 145% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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