The bar chart shows a survey of a group of young professional aged 20-30 years who were asked to state which factors motivated them to succeed.
The chart gives information on motivation factors in different factors between the age group of 20-30 years to success that obtained from a survey. Overall, factors motivations between mentioned ages have high percentages; expect three items with about 30%.
As can see, personal satisfaction with 80 percent, and similarly ambition factor with same proportion (80%), and after that family pressure, pressure from society with 70% and 60% respectively located in other parts of the chart from point of percentage.
While rivalry and desire for the material thing with same proportion (50%) located in the other parts. However, peer pressure, money with about 45%, feeling inadequate, and envy/jealousy factors are devoted 30% to themselves. The least proportion among these factors with about 28 percent was related to fear of failure.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, similarly, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 707.0 965.302439024 73% => OK
No of words: 129.0 196.424390244 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48062015504 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.37013600491 3.73543355544 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70756895233 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.697674418605 0.547539520022 127% => OK
syllable_count: 208.8 283.868780488 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.0853235381 43.030603864 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.833333333 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.23603664747 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176978758599 0.215688989381 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103046411646 0.103423049105 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119723508758 0.0843802449381 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132583258991 0.15604864568 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.126995910177 0.0819641961636 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.2329268293 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 11.4140731707 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.