The bar charts illustrate the average house expenses in England and its capital city – London, and present the comparison regarding the average house prices between distinct areas of England within the year 2013.
The first bar graphs give information about the cost of an average house in England and London from 1995 to 2013 and the second bar chart illustrates how much a house cost between six different regions of England in 2013.
Overall, it is clear that the average house prices in both England and London increased over the period whereas, in the second chart, London ranks as having the highest area of spending prices on houses in comparison with habitats in other areas.
In 1995, the house expenditure reached 200,000£ in London, logged increases to 80,000£ while people in England spent money on houses which is worth about 120,000£. In 2013, the price continued to take off when the price in London significantly doubled to 400,000£, just as the number of house expenses in its capital city slightly increased to 200,000£.
Regarding the other regions’ house prices, houses in London were recorded to be at the top of the list, reaching a high cost of 400,000£. This was followed by the South East region where people spent over 300,000£ to own a house. The third most expensive houses were located in the South and North West regions with expenses ranging from around 200,000£ to 250,000£. By contrast, the most affordable housing was in the Midlands and North East, with average prices at only around 100,000 £.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...oney on houses which is worth about 120,000£. In 2013, the price continued to take o...
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... in London significantly doubled to 400,000£, just as the number of house expenses i...
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... capital city slightly increased to 200,000£. Regarding the other regions’ house ...
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...f the list, reaching a high cost of 400,000£. This was followed by the South East re...
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...East region where people spent over 300,000£ to own a house. The third most expensiv...
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...s with expenses ranging from around 200,000£ to 250,000£. By contrast, the most affo...
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...ses ranging from around 200,000£ to 250,000£. By contrast, the most affordable housi...
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... with average prices at only around 100,000 £.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, regarding, second, so, third, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 33.7804878049 145% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1112.0 965.302439024 115% => OK
No of words: 225.0 196.424390244 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94222222222 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45512816793 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 106.607317073 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568888888889 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 305.1 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.5024161769 43.030603864 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.0 112.824112599 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.125 22.9334400587 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.875 5.23603664747 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.394688838461 0.215688989381 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.176599976191 0.103423049105 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115876828886 0.0843802449381 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.266401210417 0.15604864568 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0888595006588 0.0819641961636 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.2329268293 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 61.2550243902 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.3012195122 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.