The bar shows the percentage of people going to cinemas in one European country on di erent days

Essay topics:

The bar shows the percentage of people going to cinemas in one European country on different days.

The bar chart compares how many people visiting a cinema on weekdays in a European nation from 2003 to 2007
Looking at the graph, it is immediately obvious that there were only small fluctuations in people's preference of which day to go to the cinema over the examined period. Besides, People still liked watching in three weekends.
In 2003, 40% of people went to cinemas on Saturday, compared to 30% on Friday and Sunday each. On the other days, the percentage of movie-goers was higher on Tuesday, at 20%, while the lowest figure can be seen on Monday, at 10%.
Over the four years ensuing, the proportion of people going to the cinema on the weekends increased slightly to 45% and 35% for Saturday and Sunday, respectively. Similarly, the amount of people watching a movie at the cinema on Monday and Thursday also rose mildly about 3%. By contrast, fewer cinema-goers on Tuesday and Wednesday, with the figure falling to around 19% and nearly 9%, respectively. Finally, the rate of movie-goer choosing to go to the cinema remained fairly unchanged at 30% for 5 years.

Votes
Average: 8.9 (2 votes)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, finally, look, similarly, so, still, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 892.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 185.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82162162162 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68406547064 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643243243243 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.6786024485 43.030603864 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.5 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.125 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.125 5.23603664747 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238120405372 0.215688989381 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0959030478637 0.103423049105 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626374897112 0.0843802449381 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145499290747 0.15604864568 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.037355827617 0.0819641961636 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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