Channel one news viewing figures.

Essay topics:

Channel one news viewing figures.

The linegraph delineates the information of particular channel viewers in all months based on the specified time. Here, the graph represents the viewers in millions per day and times are 1pm, 6pm and manymore.

Begin with, In someland mostly people show the channel at 6 pm. In Jan almost 4.8 million people watch the channel at 1 pm and In december there are almost 3.1 million viewres at 1pm. In other hand the people who watch the show at 9:30 pm are rose up till may about 3.8 million after that it is plummet about 1 million viewers and again augments and reach 3 million in december.

Furthermore, there is a few public who watch the channel at 11pm which is around 0.1 million, despite this ratio is rose by 4 million in august but again plunged down in december about 1 million. Whereas the people who watch the channel at 1 pm are constant in 12 month and there is a nominal change.

Overall, the people is someland mostly watch the channel at 6 pm in 12 month. In other hand the people who watch the show at 9:30 pm are vacillated several time and in may there is few people who watch the show at 11 pm.

Votes
Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 265, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'month' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'months'.
Suggestion: months
... the channel at 1 pm are constant in 12 month and there is a nominal change. Overa...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 72, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'month' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'months'.
Suggestion: months
... mostly watch the channel at 6 pm in 12 month. In other hand the people who watch the...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 149, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun time seems to be countable; consider using: 'several times'.
Suggestion: several times
...atch the show at 9:30 pm are vacillated several time and in may there is few people who watc...
^^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, may, so, whereas

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 914.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 209.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.37320574163 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29952969473 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.473684210526 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 259.2 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.17166289 43.030603864 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.555555556 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2222222222 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.22222222222 5.23603664747 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0639766007368 0.215688989381 30% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.044628732344 0.103423049105 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0333498838584 0.0843802449381 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0489105160226 0.15604864568 31% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.013646499849 0.0819641961636 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.97 61.2550243902 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.5 10.3012195122 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.36 11.4140731707 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.12 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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