The chart below display the percentage of the area and the current population of seven continent of the earth

Essay topics:

The chart below display the percentage of the area and the current population of seven continent of the earth.

The given pie charts illustrate the information about seven continents of the world. First chart, describes the percentage of land area which is covered by them as well in the second chart, shows current proportion of world population.

Overall, the highest land area is covere by Asia where the lowest area is covere by Antarctica. However same proportion is notice in populations.

At a first glance, it is clear that, the biggest part of land (30.00%)is take by Asia because it is large continent of the world while the smallest part(6.00%) is taken by Antarctica. However, the percentage of Asia's population(61.00%) double from land area but population of Antarctica is 0.50%. Moreover, Oceania and Europe are covered land area approximately similar. There are 4% difference between land area of North America and Africa (16 and 12%).

An Oceania and Europe are covere about same area of land that is 9 %and 7% respectively. South America is the second biggest area of the world. Apart from it, population of the South America and Europe is almost same that is 13% and 12% respectively. 5.50% population is belong to Africa continent where 8.00% population live in North America.

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Average: 7.7 (2 votes)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 237, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...current proportion of world population. Overall, the highest land area is covere...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'belonged'.
Suggestion: belonged
...d 12% respectively. 5.50% population is belong to Africa continent where 8.00% populat...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, moreover, second, so, well, while, apart from

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 7.0 243% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 995.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 196.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07653061224 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82567860879 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520408163265 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 314.1 283.868780488 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.4098032565 43.030603864 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.9166666667 112.824112599 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3333333333 22.9334400587 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 5.23603664747 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2466252092 0.215688989381 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0957077246834 0.103423049105 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0671408760616 0.0843802449381 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159735658889 0.15604864568 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0807743604147 0.0819641961636 99% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.2329268293 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 61.2550243902 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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