On having a cursory glance in 1970 almost 1.2 millions had born while 1millons was died . then
The death rates was inclined up-to 1.3millon whereas birth level had declined by 0.1 millons in 1980. After a decade the birth rates was 1.7 millons and around 1.5 millons had losed of life
Moving to further in beginning of 21 century the born rates was notice dramatically increase whilst 1.1millons had died after 10 years the birth rates was 3 millons compared to morality level was low .subsequent in 2020 the birth rates would be touched to peak point and 1millon people's life would be finished
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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On having a cursory glance in 1970 almost...
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On having a cursory glance in 1970 almost 1.2 millions had born whi...
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...illions had born while 1millons was died . then The death rates was inclined up-...
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...ions had born while 1millons was died . then The death rates was inclined up-to 1....
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...millons was died . then The death rates was inclined up-to 1.3millon whereas bir...
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...ty level was low .subsequent in 2020 the birth rates would be touched to peak poi...
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...d 1millon peoples life would be finished
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 33.7804878049 47% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 500.0 965.302439024 52% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 104.0 196.424390244 53% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80769230769 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.19343686757 3.73543355544 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29146102973 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 68.0 106.607317073 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.653846153846 0.547539520022 119% => OK
syllable_count: 139.5 283.868780488 49% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 8.94146341463 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 22.4926829268 151% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 143.02447343 43.030603864 332% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 166.666666667 112.824112599 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.6666666667 22.9334400587 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 5.23603664747 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153995266738 0.215688989381 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103112742299 0.103423049105 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0418017377307 0.0843802449381 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101038194802 0.15604864568 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.04174972362 0.0819641961636 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.6 13.2329268293 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.35 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.21 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 40.7170731707 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 11.4329268293 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.9970731707 142% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.0658536585 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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