On having a cursory glance at chart in 2007 Hospital was placed at Northern side while nearest of hospital road was located both site of road were available bust stop. Parking space was presented at eastsouth. The city road was begined from east to South.
Moving to further after three periods parking field had be divided into two sections one which was used for customers that builded at east side of ring road while staff car park was situated in southern. In this period two roundabout maked one was located front of hospital and other roundabout was built in middle of city road whereas both roundabout was jointed with bus station
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: ON_FIRST_GLANCE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'at'?
Suggestion: At
On having a cursory glance at chart in 20...
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Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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On having a cursory glance at chart in 2007 Hospit...
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Line 1, column 54, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...cursory glance at chart in 2007 Hospital was placed at Northern side while neare...
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Line 1, column 59, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...ry glance at chart in 2007 Hospital was placed at Northern side while nearest of...
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Line 1, column 119, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... side while nearest of hospital road was located both site of road were available...
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Line 1, column 261, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...ty road was begined from east to South. Moving to further after three periods ...
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Line 3, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... Moving to further after three periods parking field had b...
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Line 3, column 39, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... Moving to further after three periods parking field had be divided into two s...
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Line 3, column 59, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
... after three periods parking field had be divided into two sections one which wa...
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Line 3, column 69, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...ee periods parking field had be divided into two sections one which was used for...
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Line 3, column 147, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... for customers that builded at east side of ring road while staff car park was ...
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Line 3, column 151, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... customers that builded at east side of ring road while staff car park was situ...
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Line 3, column 168, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...uilded at east side of ring road while staff car park was situated in southern....
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Line 3, column 262, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...iod two roundabout maked one was located front of hospital and other roundabout w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 530.0 965.302439024 55% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 111.0 196.424390244 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77477477477 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.24586718041 3.73543355544 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2126243507 2.65546596893 83% => OK
Unique words: 75.0 106.607317073 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.675675675676 0.547539520022 123% => OK
syllable_count: 158.4 283.868780488 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.0875516529 43.030603864 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.0 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 5.23603664747 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 1.69756097561 825% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117575198469 0.215688989381 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0693778851974 0.103423049105 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427567368053 0.0843802449381 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100697952519 0.15604864568 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0102544391554 0.0819641961636 13% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 40.7170731707 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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